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Everyone has a fault in their life.
Some more than others.
They can be often,
and be an awful strife.
Some barely let them happen.
They can come late in your life,
or as early as ten.
Some cannot be stopped,
they need to stop.
But how?
Some just give up,
they sit on their couch like a flop.
They've given in to defeat.
There come's a day,
where one thing can help them get over defeat-
to win.
There is no more time for play,
they see that there is one special thing,
to help them stop.
Whether a loved one,
or an animal-
they are not done.
Not yet.
You get up,
and let them help you.
No one has to go on alone.
Whether you have one or two,
they will be there for you.
With ever step you take.
Don't give up,
because there will be a time,
and something will come,
and save your life.
You aren't dumb,
you just need the help-
don't give in to your faults.
I realize I could have done better on this, but it's early in the morning, and I had an inspiration.
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StrawberryNeon Jul 20, 2011  Student Photographer
Very true, and very well said.
I love this. You're a brilliant poet. :]
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xXNotLostXx Jul 20, 2011  Student Writer
Awhh thank you!!
I love getting comments like that it really means so much it makes me want to continue. (:
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StrawberryNeon Jul 20, 2011  Student Photographer
You're very welcome! :aww:

:hug: That's great! :)
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:iconyazael-ortega:
inspirador! me encanta! so much people needs ear it for understend that, beatiful
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xXNotLostXx Jul 15, 2011  Student Writer
Awh thank you(:
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:iconemybunnyart:
Wow... You're lucky you can just come up with poems on the spot like that. I have to think about mine for a while before I can write them down.
Beautiful poem, by the way. :)
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xXNotLostXx Jun 30, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you so much!!!!!<3(: that means a lot! :D
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